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The memory of your eyes
Invades my brian and I can't
Breathe;
Their intensity crushes my sternum.

Beauty defined.

Encouraging my fantasies and preventing me
From realizing that the you I want
And the you that you are
Are two people who will
Never meet.
©2008-2009 ~cloudelfinulr36
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Author's Comments

I wrote this last month...yeah.

About a boy.
Duh.

His eyes are SOOO beautiful.
I've come to the conclusion that I will never date him, mainly because I've been building him up in my head for so many years so I "know" this person who looks like some one else and I can't promise myself that I wouldn't get confused about who I was dating... the real boy, or the one I've made up and dressed like the real boy.

However...I'm not below doing him, should the oppurtunity ever arise. :XD:

But yeah.

I'm not too sure about the line, "beauty defined" Orginally it was just "beautiful" but that kind of came on as the crushing was what was beautiful. I mean in a way it is/was, but...I don't know.
If anyone can give some comment...advise...etc...you know where to place it.

kthanks!

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